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On the joys (?) of revision


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“Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.”
―Bernard Malamud

So went the quotation in my email from Writers.com. (I highly recommend this newsletter, btw) I have mixed feelings about this. Yes, adjusting prose to make it clearer and more bright, to enhance the emotions in your first draft, to make your words sing – that can be pleasurable. I personally like the hack and burn part of revision, too, where you look through your tome and realize this bit AND that bit, and also the other bit, could really be thrown to the wolves (or if decent, tucked into a file for use later).

But I am licking my wounds a bit. My publisher has sent out advance review copies of my book to people and of course (probably my fault as I was pushing for release), it went out with multiple typos in it. People have noticed and commented. Sigh. One or two (you know who you are, DP!) helped me find the more egregious ones. Bless them.

Since it was exposed to some of the masses, my publisher and I have gone back and forth and back and forth, correcting things — but I’m certain little errors remain. I’m equally sure some eagle-eyed readers will find them and helpfully point them out to me so that I can revise it again.

All of which leads me to the conclusion that I will hire a copyeditor for my next book. Editors are good things (of course I would say this, being one myself). They can see things that the author misses in all sorts of places. I love my editing work. It gives me the chance to REALLY read a story, see it in its wholeness, try to help the author bring forward what they want. I’ve had great pleasure in my editing jobs – I do mostly developmental and line editing, which doesn’t require me to copyedit. Phew.

Because I realize the limit of my capabilities. I am not a copyeditor. I need helpful eyes for this. And my glasses aren’t doing it.

So, just to liven things up a bit, I will send a surprise to anyone who spots a typo in the officially released Spit & Polish book. Send me a message here, and I’ll contact you. What will it be, the surprise? Well, you will just have to wait and see…

Meantime, why not join me today, February 27, 2024, for an interview about the book and the writing process (I imagine there will be some shuffling in shame about errors), today at 4 pm AT, 5PM Eastern, 12noon Pacific on Youtube, Facebook, etc. Or you can watch me and the wonderful Anne O’Connell of OC Publishing on her YouTube channel later. It’s so generous of Anne to have me on. If you watch the show, look through her other interviews, too. She is a very generous and interested interviewer.

And don’t forget to pre-order your discount ebook before the official release date of February 29, 2924. After that things will be full price… Check out Amazon, Kobo, Apple Books, and more. The paperback will be available February 29th everywhere – just ask your local store to order in a copy for you. Or you can order directly from Somewhat Grumpy Press, too. I do hope you enjoy it!

Staying connected, or spaghetti junction


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Staying connected is becoming more complicated, not that that is anything new. It seems that I am always looking for charging cords or trying to keep up with my Coursera courses or squashing magazines into my brain between novels or madly reading everything including cereal boxes while simultaneously emailing my friends and colleagues and keeping track of Facebook. I listen to podcasts while practicing my ukulele, playing with my birds, and planning a conference. It’s madness and I can feel my brain fibres spinning out like Medusa’s head snakes, equally cranky and writhing.

It’s too much and I notice the stress is showing, as I become more scattered. I feel a bit like one of those over tasked electrical outlets, starting to get hot and sparking now and then. Not quite ablaze, but getting pretty damn close.

It’s time to take control, organize my brain, stop the endless distractions, I tell myself.
And yet – the connections to the world are important. I need my contacts to push away my existential loneliness, to shrug away depression, to enlighten my life. Time spent with friends is vital, learning equally so. I must have new input to keep moving – like my electronic devices, I need a current in to keep producing out.

So I’m revisiting Morning Pages to sort out my thoughts. And I’m using a very good visualization a counsellor gave me – every night I sever all the ties that bind and connect me, and go to sleep. The next morning, I reattach those connections that I want to keep for that day.

Today I have a few re-attachments to do, but I’m going to try to be focused. Got things to do. But let me just check FaceBook quickly…